Story Writing Contest (ENDS 8/24/13!!!)

Hello, Ice Warriors.

Now, obviously, a lot of you LOVE writing stories, and we have a TON of comments on the stories page, and so many stories I’ve read! So, in response, The IW story team are going to be hosting a Story Writing Contest! Its going to be lots of fun, but it ends this Saturday, so make sure you have at least 1 CHAPTER written on the comments page for a chance to win:

The Xat Power (Green) !

Your story On The Stories Page!

Bragging Rights!!!!!!!!

 

Though, with this contest sounding all fab and amazing, remember, Spirit week begins a day after this! So, in addition to this fun, you’ll get another week for it! Isn’t that grand? 😀

 

So, Here are the rules:

1. No inappropriate language/behavior. If you cant say it on chat, don’t say it in your story unless its censored.

2. The chapter MUST be over 100 words.

3. If you’re going to continue writing, put it in a reply, so we don’t accidentally count two of the chapters as two different stories.

4. Don’t cheat in any way, such as saying using another username “OH THIS IS A GREAT STORY!” Or submitting different stories under different names. We can track IP’s.

5. The story has to be about CP armies in general, such as Mara’s story, or a story about the army.

The judges are Albert, Mara, and I, and to the competitors:

May the best story win!

-Aqua

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  1. There once was an ugly barnacle. He was so ugly, everyone died.
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  2. There once was an ugly barnacle. He was so ugly, everyone died.
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  3. There once was a fag. All he did was nag, nag, nag. I had a knife, so I killed him. ~ CP Story ~ Joe

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  4. alicia is an alpaca

    tes is a camel

    mara is a sheep

    alb is a monkey

    thalia is a llama

    amelia is a ponie

    raven is a cat

    bears is a bear

    dolphin is a dolphin

    lion is a lion

    mini is a horse

    ben is a panda

    alpha is a dog

    o ok.

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  5. (One thing that worries me is that not a lot of people tried on stories. Or maybe they did I dunno. xD. Anyways here is my story.)
    The fire crackled. The heat was intense. The smoke was thick and black. If I breathed in anymore I was certain to died.
    “Please, help me!”
    I couldn’t breathe. I was having problems. The black smoke filled my lungs. I continued to cough and splutter. I couldn’t handle this pain any longer. I ran to the door and tried to open it. Locked. The key was destroyed.
    “Help!” I screamed, banging my fist against the door.
    “Don’t worry. We are here to help.”
    I shot back until I felt the wall against my back. Somebody was out there. Or was the black smoke making me imagine it? I crawled towards the door and banged the door violently with my fist.
    “Whoever is out there please help me! Please! I don’t want to die!”
    I stood still, anxious. Was I imagining the voice after all? Or was that voice real?
    “Stay back. We are going to break the door down.”
    I gasped. The voice was real.
    Suddenly, wood splintered everywhere. I put my hands up to protect my face but it failed. I felt a pain on my cheek. Blood dripped slowly. I started to feel dizzy. I looked up and seen people dressed in blue. They had thick blue scarfs over their mouths. They walked towards me. I coughed violently until I collapsed to the ground.
    “Alicia! Get the first aid kit quickly!” A man’s voice roared.
    “Who…are you?” I whispered weakly. My strength was gone.
    “Don’t speak anymore. You are inhaling more smoke.”
    I couldn’t concentrate anymore. The voice were distorted. I couldn’t understand them. I then drifted my attention to the man’s shoulder. A crest. I tried to concentrate more. The crest revealed writing. Two words. ‘Ice Warriors’.
    I couldn’t believe it. The Ice Warriors. I didn’t think they actually existed. I have only read about them in book and heard about them. Like they were old folks tales. But, now it was true. The Ice Warriors were real.

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  6. What Actually happened at the Night Ice Warriors Won AWL

    The whole ice warriors from members to owners sat in the meeting room. Usually this happened when there was something serious like war but no, the whole iw was celebrating winning the AWL. Albert, the leader had arranged a prize, and was going to announce it.

    ‘ All the hard work done today in defeating DW must be payed off and in the prize is……………….WE ARE GOING TO A TAYLOR SWIFT CONCERT RIGHT NOW’ Screamed Albert. The result: A huge roar went in the ice warriors. Aqua screamed in delight and Tes showed his i ❤ Taylor swift vest.

    The IW reached the concert location 10 minutes late ( Aqua forgot his perfume and mouth freshener) which made tes mad. They burst into the theatre and thanks to Icey's Passes got seats in the first row. Taylor Swift was just coming on stage as the iw seated themselves. The theatre roared with happiness and Aqua almost fainted.
    After 2 hours of screaming and shouting the concert was almost over.

    In the ned Taylor Swift Shouted something that made the whole IW mad, she asked someone to come and sing a song with her on stage!

    First to get up from their seats were Aqua and Tes. they raced for the stage but Tes punched Aqua and he fell back. But aqua grabbed Tes's ankle and they started fighting which looked more like hugging.

    'I always said they were gay' Alicia muttered.

    Suddenly a huge roar filled the theatre everyone screamed, everyone looked towards the front to see a lion standing on top of tes and aqua. The lion transforme back into Lion.p . He grinned down to the both of them and started running towards the stage. But this time a screech filled the theatre, again everyone screamed. A cat bumped Lion.P in his stomach .

    It was Raven.

    Everyone in IW was dumbfounded to see Raven this agressive. The cat scratched the lion badly. Lion transformed into a lion again and they started battling.

    Attempting to sneak queitly to the stage was Lemon. and she made it, but not for long. She reached taylor swift and got a kick on her head. Marabubamara had victory but not for long so another battle raged between Lemon and Mara.

    Meanwhile pictures of cute teddy bears with pink ribbons were showng on the screen. Bearsboy yelped and ran towards the bearsgirl in joy. He began to smooch the screen.

    The other crowd in the theatre had started placing bets between the fight of Tes and Aqua. Some started throwing tomatoes and eggs.

    Albert was still seated and was taking in the whole scene when his phone rang, it was Icey's who had been watching the concert online.

    ' WTF IS HAPPENING OUT THERE ALBERT DO SMETHING IM GETTING INSULTS FROM RPF AND ACP. AH, HERE COMES ONE FROM NACHOS. DO SOMETHING OR I FIRE YOU, YOU ARE ALREADY DEMOTED ALONG WITH EVERYONE WHO IS FIGHTING. OUR NEW LEADER IS CHRISTOPHER1. BYE'

    Albert's ears were still ringing with the screaming. Chris was the new leader others would have a heart attack. Alicia who was sitting with him heard the whole thing and was now in depression on why she was not chosen as a leader. Behind him, he heard snoring. he looked back to see Hershey sleeping peacefully and muttering '1DDDD' How could he sleep in such chaos?

    A roar of victory echoed in the theatre. everyone looked towards the fight of Aqua and Tes. Aqua had gotten hold of a knife and was grinning wickedly.

    'Whats your last wish, camel?' He smirked.

    'Dont kill me'

    'No except that'

    'I will give you a lollipop dont kill me!'

    'Good bye'

    'STOP' roared a new voice.

    the new leader of Ice Warriors stood alongside Taylor Swift.

    'EVERYONE BACK TO THERE SEATS.'

    Grumbling filled the theatre but eventually everyone came, Bears in the end.

    chris and Taylor Swift sang, chris mainly dresponsible for breaking all the glasses in theatre including iphone screen which made the crowd throw more eggs and tomatoes. finally it was time to leave.

    'Well that was fun!' Hershey exclaimed.

    'Yeh loads'

    Stupid, huh?

    THE END

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  7. lol dolph, I’ve got a story in mind might sign it up in a few mins

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  8. After some thinking and reading, I decided to do a Truth or Dare fanficion for Warriors. Here’s the crew:

    Raven- main host and obviously evil. MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!

    Aqua- minor host and also obviously evil. Now what do you think of that?
    Bears- subsitute main host and mostly good. May I take your hate, sir?

    Alicia- the builder of the studio. Bob, the builder! Can we fix it? Bob, the builder! No we can’t!

    Tes- mutant rabbit with an afro. The camera guy.

    ???- the happiest bunny- wait a minute! Happy Bunny, your annoying! Get out of here!

    FLOOR: The floor. It’s name is floor.

    Now, to dare Mara to see how it’s done!

    Raven and Aqua walked into the studio, followed by Tes, the camera guy. They walked across FLOOR to get to the magical doorbell.

    “Live in 3, 2, 1! Hello! Welcome back to Dare or Pair! This is an example episode, where we make up the dare! Today’s contestant is Mara!” Raven began.

    Raven pressed the magical doorbell, and Mara walked through the door.

    “Wha? How’d I get here?” Mara asked. “I was spying on RPF!”

    “And now you aren’t. Welcome to Dare or Pair! The official IW Truth or Dare show!” Aqua replied enthusiastically.

    “Did I win?” Mara asked.

    “You won…a dare,” Raven giggled.

    “Today’s test dare for you is to break dance at the Gathering. Two Gatherings, actually. AND inside. Inside in Alb’s office.” Aqua informed her.

    “No!” Mara cried out.

    “The punishment is to spend the whole day with Morde…” Aqua continued.

    “I’ll do the dare!” Mara told him quickly.

    “Alright! Showtime!” Raven yelled. She snapped her fingers and the three people were instantly transported to the IW Owner Meeting. Raven and Aqua hid in the bushes, while Mara was in the middle of the Meeting place in the office with a boombox.

    “Let’s get ready to RUUUUUUUUUUUUMBLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLE!” Mara cried out. He put a CD in and started break dancing. The Cd was….Foo Fighters. The Color and The Shape, to be exact. Mara had the whole CD on repeat, too.

    “Holy crud!” Honk muttered. “This is torture. No one here likes Foo Fighters.”

    “I do!” Chris told him.

    “You don’t count.” Aqua told him. “This is madness…”

    “THIS IS…SPARTA!” Alb yelled out.

    “Thank goodness, the Gathering is over,” Lemon grumbled.

    “Not so fast!” Mara added while break dancing. “This is a dare from Dare or Pair! I must break dance the whole time during Meetings, in Alb’s office, then the next Meeting, too!”

    “Holy god..” Mort groaned. “I’m glad I’m not Alb.”

    The Ownerss went to their rooms. Mara was magically transported into Alb’s office, as well as the Color and the Shape and the boom box.

    “This boom box rocks!” Mara howled.

    “DID SOMEBODY SAY BOOM?” Alb yelled as he came in. He lit up a stick of dynamite, threw it at Mara, and ran for cover. Mara kept break dancing. The dynamite exploded.

    The results: Mara, the boom box, and the Colour and the Shape had major injuries, and a horse from some farm died from a stroke because the dynamite was close by.

    CHAPTER 2 COMING SOON ON STORIES….

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  9. Here is the last part of my story. I’m going to enter it for the contest!
    Part 11…
    Elmikey comes up to us.
    “Welcome to the Death Plane. You thought you could escape me that easily, well think again. Me and Commando, which is currently piloting the plane, have parachutes to escape before this plane crashes, leaving you guys to die” Elmikey hisses.
    Suddenly, Commando gets up from his seat. Elmikey and Commando grab their parachutes and open the door of the plane. Then the next thing we know, they are gone.
    “There has to be a way to get out of here” Mort says.
    “We are gonna die” Raven says sadly as she puts her head on Mort’s shoulder.
    I then remember I kept my blades in my front pocket. I use my mouth to grad them out, pricking my mouth causing it to bleed. I then put the blade in my lap and use my mouth to grab the handle and start cutting the rope. I then cut the others rope. I find some blankets and give each one of them one.
    “Hold the blanket by the ends. It should work like a parachute just fine” I say.
    Then all of a sudden, we see an incoming rock.
    “Come on. 1, 2, 3. GOO!!” I yell.
    We jump out of the plane just in time before the plane crashes into the rock, exploding. It takes us about an hour to land. When we land, we see Elmikey and Commando in front of IW HQ.
    “Ready to bomb this dump Commando?”Elmikey asks.
    “Yes sir”
    We run to the weapons storage. I grab a bow and arrow, Barry grabs a pistol, Raven grabs a regular gun, Dancer grabs nunchucks, and Mort grabs a spear. We fight Elmikey and Mort. They didn’t have any weapons, making it easy for us to attack. Commando punches me in the stomach sending me down. Elmikey then kicks Raven to the ground. Mort runs up to her to make sure is she is ok, but then Commando takes him out too.
    “I’m going to kill you!!!” Barry yells.
    “Now youwill pay” Dancer says.
    They charge at Elmikey and Commando. Elmikey tries punching Barry, but he does a flip in the air and points the gun at Elmikey’s head. Elmikey gulps and starts to get nervous. Dancer uses his nunchucks and hits Commando’s legs with them, leaving a mark on his legs. Dancer then grabs his pocket gun out of his pocket and points it at Commando.
    “Ready Dancer” Barry says.
    “Ready”
    “On the count of three, 1, 2, 3!!! NOW”
    They both shoot at the same time. When I get up, I see blood all over Elmikey and Commando with one bullet in each of thier heads.
    “Nice job Barry and Dancer” I compliment as I high five both of them.
    “What the heck is going on here” Mara says as she comes out of the HQ.
    “They’re back” Albert says.
    “We were kidnapped by Elmikey and Commando. They planed to kill us by leaving us on the plane, letting it crash into a rock or something” Raven says as she gets up from the ground with Mort.
    “Tell us about it inside. You guys look cold” Alicia says.
    We go inside and tell them what happen.
    “Good job taking the leader and Commando out. I guess rpf is done for” Aqua says.
    “When a leader retires or dies in combat, someone is always there to replace him or her. So no, rpf is not done for, but this is a great start though” Alb says.
    “We should have a party for this victory” Barry says.
    “Yea. So let’s start setting up!” Raven says.
    We set up the supplies that afternoon. During the party, I go to my room and find a letter on under my bed. It reads:
    From Cece
    Penny, Penny, Penny. You haven’t seen the last of me. Watch your back…
    ~~~~~~~
    Someone knocks on my door. I hide the letter from Cece in my pillowcase and open my door. Aqua comes in.
    “You’re not going to party?” Aqua asks.
    “Nah. I’m too tired”
    “I also have a question. Do you like me?” he asks.
    “Well no”
    I see Aqua’s eyes turn a little clouded and dark with sadness
    “Oh. Then bye”
    As he opens the door to leave I say something.
    “Wait!”
    He closes the door and comes back into the room.
    “Your not that bad, I can say that” I say as I look into Aqua’s eyes, which lighten a little.
    I get up and kiss him on the cheek. Aqua starts blushing.
    “Then why did you just kiss me?” he asks in a nervous voice.
    “Just a thanks. Now, lets go party” I say.
    I walk out the door, holding hands with Aqua. Everything seems cool, with taking out rpf and getting more troops. It worries me that Cece might come back to kill me, but something tells me that will be a long time from now. And anyways, I got friends to protect me. Like Alb, Mara, Lemonade, Alicia, Barry, Mort, Raven, Dancer, and especially Aqua. This is the best army EVER!!!!

    The End…or is it?

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  10. Yeh theres wayyyyyy more to come!

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  11. Here’s my story!!!p.s. this is slightly different than the one in stories

    I was just another RPF soldier/slave doing extra training because I didn’t kill an innocent man during my mission.That later caused me to fail my mission.Extra training wasn’t my only punishment.Commando the RPF leader forced me to almost kill my only friend in the RPF.
    His name was Gavin.He was my roommate.Commando gave me a knife to kill him.He was eating pizza and looking out the window at the time.I walked into the room slowly so he wouldn’t hear me.I raised the knife over his head.I couldn’t do it.I stabbed myself in the arm.I screamed loudly so commando would think that I killed him.He turned to look at me.He saw the knife in my arm and knew that something was wrong.
    Run away from this place I whispered.And with that he took the pizza box climbed out the window and climbed down the building.
    Afterwards I took the knife out of my arm,

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  12. hey i had to end tht story early cause it was on my neighbors i-pad so i’ll just continue it here p.s. this is NOT part 2

    then i put on a long sleeve shirt to hide my wound.Afterwards I went into the main room where commando was.I showed him the knife with blood on it.
    The job is done I said
    Show me the knife commando said.So that’s what I did.
    Good he said.
    We are attacking the Ice Warriors once the sun goes down,which is in 20 minutes so get ready and report to the air room when it’s time.
    So I got all my stuff ready.All the RPF gave me was a gun so I took that and I put on some armor.So I went to the air room.Commando was standing in the center of the room along with two other owners Elmikey and Lord Pain.There were 70 helicopters which meant that all the troops were going.I got into a helicopter with elmikey and 8 other troops.We flew over a yard with people wearing blue.At that moment someone in the helicopter jumped out with a gun in his hand and he pulled his parachute half way to the ground.The next thing I knew everyone in the RPF was jumping out.I looked down and felt nervous.
    GO ALREADY Elmikey commanded
    so I jumped out and pulled my chute.I landed and ran towards what it looked to be their teacher.I jumped into the air and tackled her.I took my gun out of my pocket and pointed it at her head.
    I see that you dont want to kill me she said
    What?How do you know?
    I can tell you that later but now you have to hide inside where no one will see you.So I hid while the battle continued wondering what would happen next

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  13. The 2011 Christmas chaos. (This chapter contains my best friend from 2011, this took place before I met Albert417, but Alb’s mentioned in this story too)

    I couldn’t wait until the Holiday party they were having, CP’s pretty fun around this time of year, of course, Mjwoj had worked hard on them igloo decorations around this time of year, and by hard work, I’m talking about buying the supplies, why? Mjwoj almost broke his back the other night while trying to clean his chimney, I offered help but I chickened out of it. So I go to his igloo on thursday night and offer any help.

    “Christmas is coming.. are you excited, Mjwoj? Mjwoj? Whaddya doing?” I say as I look over to his closet and see him looking through it.

    “The 22nd of December.. good memories.. I remember my time with the ammo.. the loyalty.. the awesomeness.. and the old friends” Mjwoj says sadly. “Chris, you see… I’m a war veteran”

    “A veteran… of a ClubPenguin army? Ah… I’m thinking it’s ACP you’re talking about! No wait! RPF…. um… Nachos?” I say shyly.

    “No, buddy.. *sigh* Remember all of those stories I used to read to you to get to sleep when you lived here when you moved away from Alpine about 2 months ago?” Mjwoj says in a quiet voice.

    “Yeah… why?” I say

    “Chris… they are true..” Mjwoj says. “I always thought of you knowing would scare you… the IceWarriors aren’t fake. I joined them about a year ago today, best buddy, maybe you should consider joining”

    “Wait…. I can’t join them, what about you? I don’t want to leave you behind” I say in worry

    Mjwoj stares at me with a firm look and says “Oh Chris it will be fun! You’ll have friends, lots of food, and a very kind 3rd in command, trust me, how hard can it be? I’ll even let you borrow this boombox for breakdancing if you nee-”

    Mjwoj was suddenly interupted by someone breaking into the igloo while breaking the door

    Mjwoj starts getting annoyed. “WTF IS THIS MUSIC? THIS ONLY MEANS ONE THING…. NOT OUR 3IC AGAIN BRO! O.O I ONLY SAID BOOMBOX!”

    “DID SOMEBODY SAY BOOM?! A stick of dynamite lands in Mjwoj’s igloo and is lit. We were getting ambushed.

    START THE YOUTUBE MUSIC NOW!

    We run as dynamite sticks are being thrown throughout the igloo but the igloo is made of layers of titanium under the snow so it didn’t explode, a lot of questions rushed into my head.

    “C’MON BRO STOP IT! AREN’T YOU SUPPOSE TO BE 3ICING THE IW?!” Mjwoj yells in rage.

    I look through the ceiling and I see a dark blue penguin with a santa hat and blue letterman jacket with another stick of unlit dynamite and a lighter, he has a playful look on his face and when he spoke, he sounded awfully foreign.

    “Aw come on Mjwoj! Can’t you see I’m trying to have fun? It’s christmas!” The 3ic lit another dynamite and threw it in the igloo.

    “OH COME ON! CAN’T YOU BE WITH THE ICE WA-” Mjwoj was interupted by a blow to a face with the dynamite and as always, his beak went to the other side of his head like you would expect in card jitsu.

    “Mjwoj your friend looks so puny, LET’S BLOW HIM UP!” The 3ic yelled.

    “I’ll have you know I’m a girl and I’m not puny! You oughta get your facts straight!” I yell.

    “OH A GIRL! FORGIVE ME!” The 3ic comes down from the roof into the igloo and greets me, looking back at Mjwoj, he gets into some foreign rage

    “HEY MJWOJ, STOP CALLING ME A 3IC! I’LL HAVE YOU KNOW THAT SAN CHIVAS GAVE ME HIS ROLE OF 2ND IN COMMAND! YA HEAR ME!?” The 2ic yelled, and he looks back at me “Oh please forgive the trouble I have caused tonight, I am Albert417, you should join the icewarriors” Alb says.

    “Thats what Mjwoj was mentioning before you blew us up! I see you’re hispanic?” I say firmly

    “Ah yes… yes I am. Well… umm… uh… I need an excuse to get out of this place” Alb shyly says

    “BOOMBOX!” I yell loudly

    “DID SOMEBODY SAY BOOM!? PERRAS PERMITE VOLAR ESTE LUGAR! FELIZ NAVIDAD TODO EL MUNDO!” Alb yells as he blows up the entire igloo, when the smoke clears the igloo is gone and so is Alb, he leaves a note: I’ll get you a much better igloo than this, this is only the basic igloo on default for a non member! Let me get you a new one! Merry Christmas! ~Albert417

    Me and Mjwoj sit in the snowy valley with other igloos nearby. Mjwoj stands up and looks at the full moon. “We have not seen the last of our funny 2nd in command, he better be getting me a new house” That night, Mjwoj lives in my igloo for the time being.

    PART 2 TO BE WRITTEN ON THE STORIES PAGE!

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